My english competence in 2013

I choose this writing because I think that it was interseting and a lot of people agree with. Maybe there weren´t a lot of connectors or vocabulary but is like a discussion and the grammar is quite good.
http://www.fatroto.blogspot.com.es/2012/05/gossips.html

http://www.fatroto.blogspot.com.es/2012/11/nip-tuck.html
And I choose this dialogue because there are a lot of vocabulary, connectors, the grammar is perfect and the dialogues is really funny. It was my best dialogue. In this dialogue I show my fluency, my pronuntation and I realised that I improve a lot and I was proud of myself. And  I know that I have to improve more thingh but I quite happy of my job during this year.

My english progress from 2011-2013

If I look the first writing I send to Lourdes I can say that it was horrible, but lookin now I can say that I improve a lot my compositions.

I improve my grammar, but the most thing I improve it is the vocabylary and the connectors. I can see that my old compositions have the same structureband the same vocabulary maybe now I do the same but with more coonectors and new vocabulary.

I have also improve my fluency and my pronutation because I speak more than the otrher years ans also because in summer I sepeak english with the tourists.

And for oral peresentation, I have seen that my fisrt oral presentation I was so nervous and I didm´t look to my frinds I was loooking Lourdes old the time, but I improve it a lot. And I believe that oral presetntations helps you to improve your english a lot because you have more fluency, more gramar and more vocabulary too.

Dialogue

We are sitting in the arena with Bol the famous runner of 100m.l after his training

I: Hello Mr. Bolt, how are you?
B: Hello Ms. Fato, I'm fine thank you.
I: I think you are exhausted after this hard training, aren't you?
B: Well, everday after my trainings I was exhausted, but it's my job and I love it.
I: And tell me what is your daily?
B: It's very simple, when I wake up i have breakfast and then I go to my training, everyday I do the same except Sundays.
I: OMG, and you don't feel boring everyday doing the same thing? And what do you do on Sundays?
B: Oooh! no, most people say the same, but I ask them the same question, because if you really love your job then it isn't a job.
On Sundays I sit in my sofa and watch the carrer and my carrer for improve myself.
I: Wow! so old your live is atheletics. Do you have time for love? Do you have any girlfriend?
B: Well in this world you have time for everything, but yes I have a gilfriend and we are esxtremely happy.
I: This is perfect! Well thank you for your time Mr. Bolt
B: Your welcome, it is a pleasure.

Opinion: job satisfaction is more important than slary?

It is said that satisfaction and salary have the same importance. In despite of that if you have a good job but the salary isn't quite good you can´t live on this and finally you will in financial ruin. In my view it is more important the salary than the satisfaction.

Firstly, I belive that you have to survive in this life, which isn´t easly, life is extremely cruel and if you don´t stay in the misery you must have a good salary.

Secondly, I think that if you want to have a family, a house you must have a good job for to keep up your family and whatever you want you must have money. Because nowadays everything moves around the money.

Thirdly, with this crisis everything becomes more expensive, even the food.


In my opinion job is more important than satisfaction because you must earn money for pay your expenses.

Discussion: prenuptial arregements are a good idea?

Why should we do a prenuptial arregments? Are they necessary? Do they make couples or separete them?

On the one hand this prenuptial arregements separate the couple because they look for their own security and maybe they don´t rely on his partner, also it isn´t look for the future of the couple. It seems like they are single and their only interest is the security of their own economy.

On the other hand it is said that it isn´t any problem. It is only a paper and just this. They do it because it is a garanty for the couple and also for their future children.

In my opinion prenuptial arregements shouldn´t be done because if you don´t rely on your partner you musn´t marrry him/her.

Formal letter

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39 Beaumuont Street
London


 Dear Mr. Rajoy


I am writing this letter to you, because in this time everything is wrong. But there is something that is going quite wrong. Women and men have the right to equal pay for equal work in spite of that it isn´t like that.

Woman have less salary than man only because they are woman. I know that now this is more regulary althougth this happens.

I want that this situation change because the article twenty three of the universal declaration of human rights says : Everyone, without any discrimination, has the right to equal pay for equal work.

I would very much if you read my letter and if you can view the situation and do something.

Greeting,
 Fatoumata Konteh

Human Rights

Human rights are rights inherent to all human beings, whatever our nationality, place of residence, sex, national or ethnic origin, colour, religion, language, or any other status. We are all equally entitled to our human rights without discrimination.
They were created by the horrors experienced during the Second World War, most notably the genocide committed by the Nazi regime, shocked the world. War could no longer be used as an excuse to commit crimes against humanity; nor could the suffering and death of millions of innocent people be ignored.
There are 30 articles about human rights.
We are not familiar whits this right No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment or punishment. This human right is respected in Europe but it isn't respected in Africa,  India ... In the third world.