I choose this writing because I think that it was interseting and a lot of people agree with. Maybe there weren´t a lot of connectors or vocabulary but is like a discussion and the grammar is quite good.
http://www.fatroto.blogspot.com.es/2012/05/gossips.html
http://www.fatroto.blogspot.com.es/2012/11/nip-tuck.html
And I choose this dialogue because there are a lot of vocabulary, connectors, the grammar is perfect and the dialogues is really funny. It was my best dialogue. In this dialogue I show my fluency, my pronuntation and I realised that I improve a lot and I was proud of myself. And I know that I have to improve more thingh but I quite happy of my job during this year.
domingo, 12 de mayo de 2013
My english progress from 2011-2013
If I look the first writing I send to Lourdes I can say that it was horrible, but lookin now I can say that I improve a lot my compositions.
I improve my grammar, but the most thing I improve it is the vocabylary and the connectors. I can see that my old compositions have the same structureband the same vocabulary maybe now I do the same but with more coonectors and new vocabulary.
I have also improve my fluency and my pronutation because I speak more than the otrher years ans also because in summer I sepeak english with the tourists.
And for oral peresentation, I have seen that my fisrt oral presentation I was so nervous and I didm´t look to my frinds I was loooking Lourdes old the time, but I improve it a lot. And I believe that oral presetntations helps you to improve your english a lot because you have more fluency, more gramar and more vocabulary too.
I improve my grammar, but the most thing I improve it is the vocabylary and the connectors. I can see that my old compositions have the same structureband the same vocabulary maybe now I do the same but with more coonectors and new vocabulary.
I have also improve my fluency and my pronutation because I speak more than the otrher years ans also because in summer I sepeak english with the tourists.
And for oral peresentation, I have seen that my fisrt oral presentation I was so nervous and I didm´t look to my frinds I was loooking Lourdes old the time, but I improve it a lot. And I believe that oral presetntations helps you to improve your english a lot because you have more fluency, more gramar and more vocabulary too.
Hi Sandra,
I've just been talking to my mum about our summer holidays, and she
suggested that this year you could spend a couple of weeks with us. We saty near the sea and the weather's is extremely good. I'll be there all the summer, so if you can come, which month would you come? I prefer July but it is up to you.
We have small spare room in our apartment there and we saty there. I think that it will be nice do a lot of things, like sports, visiting places, go to the beach and meet new people.
Hope to her from you soon!
Fato
I've just been talking to my mum about our summer holidays, and she
suggested that this year you could spend a couple of weeks with us. We saty near the sea and the weather's is extremely good. I'll be there all the summer, so if you can come, which month would you come? I prefer July but it is up to you.
We have small spare room in our apartment there and we saty there. I think that it will be nice do a lot of things, like sports, visiting places, go to the beach and meet new people.
Hope to her from you soon!
Fato
Summer 2013
This summer will be the best summer in my life, because I will finsh 2 bat and then I will go to the university to stduy infermeria but I don´t know where yet.
Well when we finish the selectivitat, I and my friends will go to Mallorca (Magalluf) and we stay ther for five days I think and after this trip I have to get my drive's license and have a job for pay my stuff. It will be the best because I haven´t to thik about exams or about the resarch project. Only I have to enjoy the summer with any concerns.
I can´t wait to go to Mallorca because I'm sure that it will be really exciting and we'll not stop.
Well when we finish the selectivitat, I and my friends will go to Mallorca (Magalluf) and we stay ther for five days I think and after this trip I have to get my drive's license and have a job for pay my stuff. It will be the best because I haven´t to thik about exams or about the resarch project. Only I have to enjoy the summer with any concerns.
I can´t wait to go to Mallorca because I'm sure that it will be really exciting and we'll not stop.
History
When I look back on it now, I realised it was the most exciting day of my life.
I was gonig to my high school when suddenly someone took me and when I relaised I knew that he had kidnapped me. I was so nervous and I was afraid because I was a poor girl and wasn't famous. So I didn´t know what would happen.
Then after many hours, someone saud to me that everything was a film and they took me because they wanted to look real so I was in the "wrong or right" place.
I'll never forget this day, it was amazing and bizarre.
I was gonig to my high school when suddenly someone took me and when I relaised I knew that he had kidnapped me. I was so nervous and I was afraid because I was a poor girl and wasn't famous. So I didn´t know what would happen.
Then after many hours, someone saud to me that everything was a film and they took me because they wanted to look real so I was in the "wrong or right" place.
I'll never forget this day, it was amazing and bizarre.
Zoo seeks mate for last surviving 'gorgeously ugly' fish
The Zoo, wich describesthe fish as "gorgeously ugly", is hoping to start a conservation program if a fit female can be found for the captive males. There had been a female captivity at the German zoo but attempts to breed ended in disaster when de male kill her. Mr Zimmerman is not very confident for the future of the species.
I don't now so much about fishes but I think that if this species die it wouldn´t be any problem. Because it is only a fish and it hasn´t got any benefits for us only we have it because it is "beautiful" and that's it. Maybe some pople say that I'm a crazy girls for say this things, but this is my opinion and I think it wouldn´t be the end of world
if this fish die.
http://www.wordreference.com/es/translation.asp?tranword=seeks%20(Seeks)
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-22468206
I don't now so much about fishes but I think that if this species die it wouldn´t be any problem. Because it is only a fish and it hasn´t got any benefits for us only we have it because it is "beautiful" and that's it. Maybe some pople say that I'm a crazy girls for say this things, but this is my opinion and I think it wouldn´t be the end of world
if this fish die.
http://www.wordreference.com/es/translation.asp?tranword=seeks%20(Seeks)
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-22468206
Mobiles 'to outnumber people next year', says UN agency
There will be more mobile
subscriptions than people in the world by the end of next year. There are
currently 6.8 billion mobile subscription and 7.1 billion people, the
Commonwealth of Independent States, the alliance of countries formerly in the
Soviet Union, has the highest mobile penetration with 1.7 subscription for every
person. Africa has the least, with 63 subscriptions per 100 inhabitants.
sábado, 11 de mayo de 2013
Defrocked 'Nuns' Found With Drugs
Three "nuns" on a flight from Colombia to the Caribbean island of San Andres have been stopped by police on a hunch because of their suspicious habits. The hunch was correct and police found more than 4lb of cocaine (2kg) strapped to the legs of each woman. The women apparently burst into tears. They told officers they had been forced to carry the drugs because of financial hardship.The women were arrested.
When I saw this news I can´t belived it, they might have a brilliant imagination, because it's an excellent idea for tranport drugs. But they made a big mistake they didn´t have to be nervous. If they didn´t be nervous the police didn´t know it and they weren´t arrested.
Cleveland Women's Escape From Long Captivity Unprecedented
The case of the man in Cleveland, Ohio, accused of kidnapping three women and a young child is both horrific and rare. The news that Amanda Berry, Gina DeJesus and Michelle Knight were alive and free, after being kidnapped a decade ago, sparked celebrations in their home town. Robert Lowery, with the National Center for Missing & Exploited Children, said their miraculous escape from years of captivity is unprecedented in the U.S, because usually, the longer children go missing, the smaller the chance they will be found alive. But Lowery said this case and others give new cause for hope.
I found this new interesting and rare. How a person can do this? I think that only a evil person can do it, because this is extremely shocking. This girls have been very lucky because thousands of children dissaperd and aren´t found.
http://www.voanews.com/content/cleveland-womens-escape-from-long-captivity-is-unprecedented/1658887.html
I found this new interesting and rare. How a person can do this? I think that only a evil person can do it, because this is extremely shocking. This girls have been very lucky because thousands of children dissaperd and aren´t found.
http://www.voanews.com/content/cleveland-womens-escape-from-long-captivity-is-unprecedented/1658887.html
Dialogue
We are sitting in the arena with Bol the famous runner of 100m.l after his training
I: Hello Mr. Bolt, how are you?
B: Hello Ms. Fato, I'm fine thank you.
I: I think you are exhausted after this hard training, aren't you?
B: Well, everday after my trainings I was exhausted, but it's my job and I love it.
I: And tell me what is your daily?
B: It's very simple, when I wake up i have breakfast and then I go to my training, everyday I do the same except Sundays.
I: OMG, and you don't feel boring everyday doing the same thing? And what do you do on Sundays?
B: Oooh! no, most people say the same, but I ask them the same question, because if you really love your job then it isn't a job.
On Sundays I sit in my sofa and watch the carrer and my carrer for improve myself.
I: Wow! so old your live is atheletics. Do you have time for love? Do you have any girlfriend?
B: Well in this world you have time for everything, but yes I have a gilfriend and we are esxtremely happy.
I: This is perfect! Well thank you for your time Mr. Bolt
B: Your welcome, it is a pleasure.
I: Hello Mr. Bolt, how are you?
B: Hello Ms. Fato, I'm fine thank you.
I: I think you are exhausted after this hard training, aren't you?
B: Well, everday after my trainings I was exhausted, but it's my job and I love it.
I: And tell me what is your daily?
B: It's very simple, when I wake up i have breakfast and then I go to my training, everyday I do the same except Sundays.
I: OMG, and you don't feel boring everyday doing the same thing? And what do you do on Sundays?
B: Oooh! no, most people say the same, but I ask them the same question, because if you really love your job then it isn't a job.
On Sundays I sit in my sofa and watch the carrer and my carrer for improve myself.
I: Wow! so old your live is atheletics. Do you have time for love? Do you have any girlfriend?
B: Well in this world you have time for everything, but yes I have a gilfriend and we are esxtremely happy.
I: This is perfect! Well thank you for your time Mr. Bolt
B: Your welcome, it is a pleasure.
martes, 7 de mayo de 2013
Opinion: job satisfaction is more important than slary?
It is said that satisfaction and salary have the same importance. In despite of that if you have a good job but the salary isn't quite good you can´t live on this and finally you will in financial ruin. In my view it is more important the salary than the satisfaction.
Firstly, I belive that you have to survive in this life, which isn´t easly, life is extremely cruel and if you don´t stay in the misery you must have a good salary.
Secondly, I think that if you want to have a family, a house you must have a good job for to keep up your family and whatever you want you must have money. Because nowadays everything moves around the money.
Thirdly, with this crisis everything becomes more expensive, even the food.
In my opinion job is more important than satisfaction because you must earn money for pay your expenses.
Firstly, I belive that you have to survive in this life, which isn´t easly, life is extremely cruel and if you don´t stay in the misery you must have a good salary.
Secondly, I think that if you want to have a family, a house you must have a good job for to keep up your family and whatever you want you must have money. Because nowadays everything moves around the money.
Thirdly, with this crisis everything becomes more expensive, even the food.
In my opinion job is more important than satisfaction because you must earn money for pay your expenses.
Discussion: prenuptial arregements are a good idea?
Why should we do a prenuptial arregments? Are they necessary? Do they make couples or separete them?
On the one hand this prenuptial arregements separate the couple because they look for their own security and maybe they don´t rely on his partner, also it isn´t look for the future of the couple. It seems like they are single and their only interest is the security of their own economy.
On the other hand it is said that it isn´t any problem. It is only a paper and just this. They do it because it is a garanty for the couple and also for their future children.
In my opinion prenuptial arregements shouldn´t be done because if you don´t rely on your partner you musn´t marrry him/her.
On the one hand this prenuptial arregements separate the couple because they look for their own security and maybe they don´t rely on his partner, also it isn´t look for the future of the couple. It seems like they are single and their only interest is the security of their own economy.
On the other hand it is said that it isn´t any problem. It is only a paper and just this. They do it because it is a garanty for the couple and also for their future children.
In my opinion prenuptial arregements shouldn´t be done because if you don´t rely on your partner you musn´t marrry him/her.
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